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51. A Couple of Somethings

Jul01
by on July 1, 2015 at 5:01 am
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Happy Canada Day!

For those of you outside Canada, let me explain.

In the USA, the Forth of July is when they celebrate gaining their independence from Britain.  This was achieved by launching the American Revolutionary War.

On Canada Day we celebrate gaining our independence from Britain.  This was achieved by asking politely.

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CAPTION:
The next morning.
Sunday.

SNOW WHITE:
Good morning, Wilhelm.

WILHELM:
Good morning, Princess.
Is... Is everything alright? You seem upset.

SNOW WHITE:
I...
I had a fight with my step-mother, and I...
I did something I shouldn't have.
A couple of somethings.

WILHELM:
I'm sure I wouldn't know anything about that.

SNOW WHITE:
But you don't want to hear about my troubles.
How is Hans doing?

WILHELM:
His fever broke in the night. I think he'll recover.

SNOW WHITE:
Well that's good news.

LOTHVAR:
Princess Margaretha. There you are. I've been looking for you everywhere.

SNOW WHITE:
Sir Lothvar? What can I do for you?


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52. Make It Right

Jul03
by on July 3, 2015 at 5:01 am
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LOTHVAR:
Your stepmother wants you to accomp-

SNOW WHITE:
Oh, please tell her I'm sorry. I didn't mean it. My hands were covered in lotion and it just slipped.

LOTHVAR:
Yes, I'm sure, but -

SNOW WHITE:
And her mirror! I don't know what came over me. I didn't mean to break it. Somehow I'll -

LOTHVAR:
You are to come with me into the woods where we-

SNOW WHITE:
Of course - that's brilliant! You can take me to this Old Man she is always talking about. I'll get him to make more lotion; maybe even fix her mirror.

LOTHVAR:
Umm . . .

SNOW WHITE:
Thank you! I'll make this right.
Just stay here for a moment while I fetch my cloak.
I'll be ready in just a minute.

CAPTION:
As she ran off, the Captain of the Queen's bodyguard turned away. "Why did she have to be so cheerful?" he thought, when his orders were to take her into the woods and kill her.

JACKIE (off panel):
That's hard to believe.


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66. Jumble of Conflicting Emotions

Aug05
by on August 5, 2015 at 5:01 am
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CAPTION:
Deep into the forest.
As they rode, Princess Margaretha's thoughts were a jumble of conflicting emotions.
While Captain Lothvar's were as focused as they were troubled.

SNOW WHITE (thought balloon):
How could I have not seen it sooner?

LOTHVAR:
Your majesty, you can't be serious!

QUEEN:
I am deadly serious.

SNOW WHITE (thought balloon):
The “Queen of Grace and Beauty” is a fraud.
It's all just witchcraft and trickery,

LOTHVAR:
But she is the King's daughter.
It would be treason - he'd execute us both!


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67. Intact and Unblemished

Aug07
by on August 7, 2015 at 5:01 am
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SNOW WHITE (thought balloon):
But I shouldn't have broken her favourite mirror.
Or her jar of lotion, for that matter.

QUEEN:
He'll never find out.
Take her deep into the woods to do it.
But bring me her heart, intact and unblemished.

SNOW WHITE (thought balloon):
How could I have been so reckless and foolish?

LOTHVAR:
But if someone discovers the body -
they'd never stop looking for her killer.

SNOW WHITE (thought balloon):
But if I can talk to this “Old Man of the Woods”, I can make it right.
And maybe even get some answers.

QUEEN:
You're right.
Let me think . . .
Bring me her skin as well - then no one could possibly identify her.


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68. Stop At This Glade

Aug10
by on August 10, 2015 at 5:01 am
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SNOW WHITE:
Is it much further?

LOTHVAR:
We're. . .
We're almost there.
But first we'll stop at this glade. . .
We can freshen up here before concluding our journey.

SNOW WHITE:
That sounds great,
it has been such a long ride.
You've been very kind.
I really needed this chance to fix things with my step-mother.


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69. What A Beautiful Glade

Aug12
by on August 12, 2015 at 5:01 am
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SNOW WHITE:

What a beautiful glade.

Ha ha!

The water is glorious. You really must join -


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71. Go Ahead And Drown

Aug17
by on August 17, 2015 at 5:01 am
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CAPTION:
As the current pulled her violently under, her lungs burned for lack of air.

Hysterically fighting the raging current, she managed to break to the surface for a desperate gasp of air,

Only to be pulled under once again.

LOTHVAR:
You want to drown, then go ahead and Drown!
Either way, you die this day!


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86. She Wandered Off

Oct05
by on October 5, 2015 at 10:27 pm
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Hi all:

I know that it’s been a while since the last update.  I’m currently in the middle of packing up everything I own and moving across the city.

Baring the unforeseen, it may be another couple of weeks before regular updates start happening.  Check back starting around the middle of November.

So, sorry for the delay - but I promise it will be worth the wait.

The story is about to get really good…

 

Stuart

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CAPTION:
Meanwhile, back at the Palace.

SIR MATTHIAS:
Your Majesty, You wanted to be told when a rider approached.

QUEEN:
Finally! Send Lothvar to me immediately.

SIR MATTHIAS:
But your Majesty, it isn't Lothvar. It is Prince Leopold.

QUEEN:
Well send him in, but keep watch for Lothvar.
I want to see him the minute he arrives.

SIR MATTHIAS:
As you command.

PRINCE LEOPOLD:
Good day Step-Mother. I came as soon as I was able.

QUEEN:
Greetings, Prince Leopold. What brings you to the palace? Is your father with you?

PRINCE LEOPOLD:
He is still at Arlcliff Castle. I came to help search for little Maggie.

QUEEN:
Of course you did. I was just... surprised you heard about it so soon.

PRINCE LEOPOLD:
What can you tell me about what happened?

QUEEN:
She and Captain Lothvar went into the forest yesterday and neither have been seen since.

PRINCE LEOPOLD:
Well if they can be found, I will find them.

LOTHVAR:
Your Majesty, I...

PRINCE LEOPOLD:
Lothvar, you made it back! Is the princess with you?

LOTHVAR:
She... wandered off... I tried to find her...

PRINCE LEOPOLD:
I'm sure you did all you could. What route did you take into the forest?

LOTHVAR:
We... followed the old mill road.


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